Do you tend to speak up? Identify a context or situation in which you tend to speak up or refrain from speaking up. Discuss why you choose to speak up or not to speak up in that particular context.
In crafting your response, consider how factors such as personality, feelings, family, culture, education, and/or societal pressure may affect your decision.
JUST USE THE DRAFT 1 TO EDIT DRAFT 2.
THE REQUIREMENT OF EDITING :
1.The Thesis statement should about：
The boss of organization wanted workers to just work 100%, and did not value them as individuals, did not care about health/ well-being/ mental problems.
2. the fourth paragraph of draft 1 might be the conclusion. (the conclusion should about :problems cannot be solved if no one speaks up)
3. do not use any quotation or reference.
Please edit this draft as well as you can by yourself before you hand it in! Use the following ppt to edit: