This is a good start. A lot of this paper is not in the compare/contrast formula. For instance, ther

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This is a good start.  

A lot of this paper is not in the compare/contrast formula.  For instance, there is an entire paragraph about Katrina.  What is it that you are comparing and contrasting?  You may be trying to make some comparisons, but it is not clear.  

Be sure your paper compares and contrasts stuff about hurricanes and blizzards.  Right now there's a lot of great facts about them, but the point of the paper is to compare/contrast, not just research and write.  

I see only one in-text citation (Nat'l Geographic.)  

Solid start, just bring it into assignment parameters.  

 

 

So basically the work will be revising my essay and helping me put it more into a compare and contrast style. The beginning is good but the middle gets a little more like research I am sorta stuck and need help. It has to be 5 pages but I already have that it just needs to be re worded. 

 

 

 

 

 

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